Come se scrive un email in inglese?
Chi è Vincent C. Torrieri?
Background professionale:
Ampia conoscenza e esperienza per quanto riguarda ricercare e riportare notizie di cronaca, svolgimento di indagini giornalistiche, scrivere articoli, redazione, intervistare, curare soggetti e sceneggiature per programmi televisivi, per emittenti radiofoniche e per compagnie cinematografiche.
Lasciato il mondo del giornalismo per insegnare l’inglese alle società in Italia – Specialità – Business Communications – Language Coach.
Titoli Di Studi:
YORK UNIVERSITY, Toronto, Ontario (1984-1987)
Laureato a livello Bachelor in scienze politiche e in filosofia
RYERSON POLYTECHNICAL INSTITUTE, Toronto, Ontario (1988-1990)
Laureato a livello Bachelor nelle arti applicate con specializzazione in giornalismo
UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE LOCAL EXAMINATION SYNDICATE (UCLES)- Certificato English Language Teaching to Adults – Verona, Italy (1998) + Trinity Language Workshops
Esperienza d’insegnamento
Language Instructor – Sabaudia’s Missile Air Defence base. (2004)
Trained High Ranking Military Personnel, low Level English to medium Level English, Military Language Code Procedures.
Business Language Consultant – Business Crash Courses and Seminars -Responsible for co-ordinating and teaching Individual and Group Courses. Companies include:
Dalmine Tenaris, Disney, DHL, Exxon, Fater, Fameccanica, Gefco, Geodis and other freight forwarding companies including Cargo City Milan. (Johnson & Johnson) Quintiles and Merloni, Indesit, SGS, UPS and many more.
Exam results for students –
Cambridge BEC Exams (Business English Certificates) 95%
Cambridge Exams – 90% – Trinity Exams – 90%
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Writing a business email —-
Here is a typical example of a bad business email
To: the team@abc.com
Cc:
Subject: Broadcast Faulty Measure Procedure
Hi All,
As discuss with Client delivery team. Problems when we try to enable or disable faulty measure in the future. We also need to check all Wi-Fi connecters.
If you have no problem, I demonstrate on pc after lunch (around 15 min)
Regards,
David Fox Hunt
Step One – The Mechanics – Correct the Grammar and punctuation.
To: the team@abc.com
Cc:
Subject: Broadcast Faulty Measure Procedure
Hi All,
As we have discussed with the client delivery team, we have problems when we try to enable or disable faulty messages in the future. Also check Wi-Fi connecters.
If you have no problem, I will demonstrate on my pc after lunch (around 15 minutes)
Regards,
David Fox Hunt
Step Two: Style – Business email – Good business is simple and clear
To: the team@abc.com
Cc:
Subject: Workshop: Demonstration on solving error messages
Hi All,
As we have discussed with the client delivery team, we have problems when we try to enable or disable error messages in the future. We also need to show how to check the status of all Wi-Fi connecters.
If you have no problem, I will demonstrate on my pc after lunch. The demonstration should take about 15 minutes.
Regards,
David Fox Hunt
Step Three: Tone – Business email – A positive message
To: the team@abc.com
Cc: the boss
Subject: Briefing: Demonstration on solving error messages
Dear Colleagues,
As we have discussed with the client delivery team, we have been having some issues when we try to enable or disable the error messages. We also need to show you how to check the status of all Wi-Fi connecters.
I will demonstrate on my pc tomorrow at 1330. The demonstration should take about 15 minutes and it will save us a lot of time in dealing with our clients.
Feel free to contact me should you have any questions and/or concerns.
Best,
David Fox Hunt
